Under the bed

WALT: we are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing.

This is work i have written and edited myself its still a work in progress.

UNDER THE BED

He is frightened and scared because he must have seen a monster or something it must be scary he is afraid what's  under the bed. He is wearing car pajamas and he has a teddy bears to sleep with. He must be scared what could he see but he's very brave must not be scared because never fear the monster detector is here but wait what is it going to do. Is it friendly is it deadly which one could it be well we will have to find out but don't be afraid he pulled out a box from under his bed hes is scared to open his eyes but wait the curious boy he's a curious all right. The  boy opens his eyes and he sees and he sees…NOTHING! it was all a dream.

THE END

Reflection: the easy part was inserting the picture.

Question: do you write and what do you write about?